Place does affect the way I write—maybe the tone—but it always has an influence. Does place matter in your work? Poet Scot Young asked this question in his blog and I said yes.
When I go walking, thoughts come to me, and they seem to resonate with the sky, trees, roadside litter, sounds, everything. I thought it would take a series of essays to amplify my “yes”. Time comes into it too. My best is the early morning and ideally I’d be abroad on highways and byways as the sky lightened, ready to greet every dawn. One wants to squeeze everything into one’s time of greatest strength and alertness, so it’s not easy to get out the door, but last Friday I managed it by eight, with camera and voice recorder as surrogate friends to share the experience. This is the tale I bring back. —
There’s a fresh breeze and it’s damp rather than cold. A weak newborn sun lights the hurrying pedestrians on their way to work. I pretend the cars are not there and I’m in the nineteenth century. It works pretty well except when I have to cross a road, when self-preservation takes priority. K has lent me a pedometer which she got on loan for a week from her employers, the National Health Service, that symbol of socialistic kindness which blesses her Majesty’s subjects with its concern for their wellbeing. 10,000 steps per day is recommended. Let’s see what I do on this walk along the Wye Valley to Loudwater.
The ground is covered with fresh-fallen leaves. For a moment, I wonder why they appear so poignant, like fresh-fallen snow. I imagine a small child seeing them for the first time; and then a man in the autumn of his life remembering every Fall since he was old enough to walk, especially the first time he noticed the leaves stuck damply to the sidewalk; or dry crackling ones windblown into thick heaps that he shuffled noisily through, holding a parent’s hand. I call
him Everyman, and know that I am he.
After the first mile, I leave those streets with their streams of workers, and go diagonally through the park, reaching the trail of public footpaths which penetrate every obstacle: woods, meadows, housing developments, factories. There used to be several papermills along this valley, powered by waterwheels, one of which has been reconstructed out of a respect for history. On special occasions they use it to grind a few sackfuls of wheat, but mostly it lies silent, desolate, the millrace diverted
by sluice-gates.
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The word Freedom comes into my head. I suppose in the recent Presidential election it was a word of mystical power. I can understand how it would still be so—to one chafing in servitude. Why is Freedom still a slogan to those who see themselves as already free? They feel burdened with the duty to defend it. I had another “universal revelation” Everyone acts to protect what’s sacred in their society. Attack that and there will be a fierce response. “Submission to the will and laws of Allah is the source of all freedom”, says Islam, which means “submission”. Two definitions in collision.
For some reason I have always found it easy to identify with the downtrodden, and have little sympathy with the powerful. I don’t mean to attack freedom, or any other concept of the sacred: just to scrutinize it. I think of a peasant as freer than an ambitious office-worker, but that’s just my bias. I’m in a meadow, closely following the meandering river. On the other side are newish apartment blocks, with balconies and neat communal gardens. They need no fence because the water makes a natural boundary.
I think about Americans, in a week momentous in their history. They seem like an Old Testament people. We only hear the Israelite side of their story. The Philistines and followers of Ba’al would have had their story too: their own myths, their own heroes and tales of inspiration, but we don’t know them, only winners’ history, somehow pasted into the scriptures of two separate religions. The things that matter to a tribe are often encoded within a religious belief-structure, that may seem like superstition or
prejudice. It is not surprising that in a progressive society, the urge is to let rationality sweep those things away, ignorant of the precious secret: that the sacred is hidden, wrapped up in the mumbo-jumbo. What is the sacred? It’s something revered because it is necessary for the healthy existence—and coexistence—of mankind.
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I move to another branch of the river which has squirrels dashing along the path to take the bread and seed which people had scattered to feed the ducks and swans. I encounter a rat near the place where the river disappears into a culvert. It regards me coolly with whiskers a-twitch before going about its business, in no particular hurry. Being classified as “vermin” and unworthy of humane treatment hasn’t made it hate or fear me. Its forebears spread bubonic plague throughout old Europe. In this moment, looking one another warily in the eye, we’re of equal stature. Sailors once spread syphilis; missionaries once spread the idea of sin and redemption to savages who
were fine without it. As species, neither of us lives on the moral high ground. Brother Rat, this is a live-and-let-live-moment. I wish you and your family well.

I pass through meadows, paths, the alleys between the backyards of suburban houses, and reach the embankment of a disused railway line. Nearby there’s a waste-water treatment plant which collects from a big pipe and pumps effluent into the river. It’s good to see the infrastructure of this town, and I pass all kinds on this walk: red Royal Mail vans, postmen on foot, electricity transformer substations, gas distribution, water, and now sewerage, which I feel moved to photograph. It works for us invisibly, we depend on it: like someone’s idea of God. The sewerage system and all who work on it deserve my gratitude.
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I’m on a narrow footpath now, beside a bit of river straight like a canal. I’ve been here before, one steaming August day after rain. The wet undergrowth gave out aromatic exhalations, principally from the luxuriant Himalayan balsam, an invasive species which has escaped into the wild. “The aggressive seed dispersal, coupled with high nectar production which attracts pollinators, often allows the Himalayan Balsam to outcompete native plants.” Today it’s warm for mid-November, but riverside weeds are in decline, saving their strength to survive the coming winter.
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Where was I? The sacred. Locked up like a seed within the pod of superstitions, posturing and corruption, there is something lively and noble in every culture. Never mind the axis of evil. Here, on this fresh morning, in this valley, it seems totally clear that our leaders should talk to Al-Qaeda and Taliban, face to face. Then we’ll discover we are exactly like them. We have our ideas of the sacred, which we feel to be threatened: so do they. Has war any other cause? Enemies should approach one another bearing gifts, ready to listen and be magnanimous. The conflicts would evaporate. That is exactly how the derided “savages” used to do business.
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The footpath takes a zig-zag route through meadows. Then there’s a recreation-ground where dogs take their owners for walks, and lift their legs against goalposts; and now an overgrown alley between backyards and warehouses. The alley debouches into a suburban development of modest houses. In the UK it seems you can’t build over public footpaths, even though you’ve bought the land. The law makes them immortal. There’s one called the Ridgway Path which dates back several thousand years. Only a terrible calamity would erase these footpaths. First to go would be motor-vehicles: supplies of refined oil would be cut.. Then the complex infrastructure: mail, electricity, gas, piped water, sewerage. The supermarkets, presently bursting with food like Christmas every day, would empty and become derelict, their perished remnants left to the
rats. Footpaths will stay, like King Arthur waiting dormant till they are needed to save Britain once more.
One day, clinging to my final breaths, I may wander these neglected paths one last time, bidding them farewell—of course only in memory, if that hasn’t been wiped already.
Whilst I’m getting carried away on this fantasy—footpath as symbol of eternal reality—a couple of elderly ladies approach from the opposite direction. It’s a narrow straight path passing between backyards on either side. There’s something unexpected about their greeting. It seems to carry joy. I am no more ready to commune with “Perfect Strangers” than I would be to meet a favourite great-aunt, long departed, whom one of these ladies fleetingly resembles. I find myself tongue-tied, only able to mumble something conventional; still, I can share their smile. It’s as if we are in church and it’s that point in the liturgy they call The Peace: “The people stand and greet one
another and exchange signs of God’s peace in the name of the Lord.”
It’s like meeting the stranger on the road to Emmaus.
I had no words for those ladies then, just these for you now.
you bet Vincent–place matters. I think the moment matters as much. I guess I need a voice recorder because when the words come influenced by place and I don't get them down, they may be gone blown away by the wind or age–the moment lost.
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I am a bit envious of these long walks, and find even in the reading that for me too, place is important. I hadn't ever thought of carrying a voice recorder and it could be an interesting exercise to try out. These days stuck at a desk staring at a box for more hours than I care to admit to, or care to be doing for that matter, and finding that in these last days of immense server crises, etc., I have so hungered for a breaking of the shackles, for freedom, that all I could do was throw some paint around and do some frantic doodling in the wee hours to try and connect to some other place.
And then I come here and find I am transported, as if I were your walking companion…such vivid descriptions that make it so real.
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Ah, Serenity, I just came back from another walk, and I was going down a muddy path thinking of you and your server problems and how I would tell you that your blog reminds me of the Book of Job. Which has a happy ending of course.
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Yes, Scot, try the voice recorder. I find it helps one remember the original experience, but it doesn't capture the feeling. It's just notes and reminders. The best part, I find, is you can tell the machine and let go of the thought!
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Serenity, if you are physically up to it, and have somewhere to go where you feel safe, there is nothing like walking to clear the head, and connect you with something more primitive and fulfilling than all this technology! The liberation for me came after the walk I described here, because I discovered I can walk four hours at a stretch and probably more. It takes time to build up the stamina especially after illness but the benefits are multi-dimensional.
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The most powerful writing transports one to place too – and I was there, if not walking in your shoes, seeing with your words. Place matters to everything. We all long and need to be somewhere – whether it be standing still or travelling – and wherever that somewhere is it will influence our moods and emotions.
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Perhaps this is why I don't aspire myself a writer — I also experience this journey “with” you, but realize that the journey you lead me on with words is my journey, not yours. Of course, my use of “you” here implies the “other person” in any sort of literary piece.
Having said that, I do enjoy reading this sort of experimental literature you're producing, Vincent. It's well suited to the blog-sphere, but it leaves me wanting to know what's left on the cutting room floor.
I do see your point about the political advantages by association — which we discussed on my blog — just as I understand your point about seeing a battle from both sides. These are ideological battles over right and wrong. Naturally, both sides think they are only on one side of the battle. However, truth permeates both sides and stands alone as the winner — regardless of the outcome. Maybe this is what you mean, but in verbiage I struggle to resonate with.
No matter, please continue to produce — it's refreshing to go on these journeys “with” you. Perhaps the one line that stuck out most at me in this whole piece was:
“I pretend the cars are not there and I’m in the nineteenth century.”
I do something similar… trying to take in a perspective of what a place was before, long before it is now.
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Tim it is precisely your journey that my words aspire to lead you on.
Well, there is a great deal left on the cutting-room floor. You have inspired me to start another blog entitled “The cutting-room floor”, in which I could put some of what is left out from here. I cannot decide if that would be a good idea or not. Brilliant, yes, but not necessarily advisable.
It doesn't surprise me that you struggle to resonate with my verbiage on some matters. I throw out those ideas as belonging to a valley reverie: as being a kind of fiction, the thoughts of a character, or an opposition politician who, not expecting to be ever in office, can offer low taxes and high social handouts. Of which more in my next—not politics but a kind of anti-politics which I will explain.
Yes, glad you responded to the nineteenth-century thing. You see, I am not sure that the past is entirely gone. It's just as real. It offers itself to connect with, though we can only connect with it today.
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Lehane (do you mind me calling you by surname only, it makes you like a fellow-pupil at my boys-only schools a century or so ago?):
Yes that longing to be somewhere, or more accurately the acceptance of actually being somewhere – not a reference on a GPS map, but actually having two feet planted on the ground, or pacing the earth or the tarmac – that is what keeps us sane in the way that an animal is sane.
Or perhaps gets us sane, if the vibes and circs are right. For how can we live (truly, madly, deeply) without the embracing of our precise current environment? Can we really be content unless we are able to say that wherever we call home is the best place in the world to be? And is it not possible somehow by an heroic effort of embracing, to love that which surrounds and touches us? Effort is always involved, even if it comes automatically; for there is also a part of us which finds this whole world alien, as if we have dropped from a heavenly cloud, with vague memories of something so much better than this.
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I want to add a comment, a year later (20th November 2009). I mentioned the paths being sacrosanct, but yesterday I tried to join that same valley path, near the sewerage plant, and found it closed. Major building works are afoot, the place abuzz with bulldozers, mud and workers in yellow reflective jackets. I remember there had been a sign about this. I do hope the path will open again!
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